One day l was running down the hall then l was hurtling though space then l was in our dimension which was really really.....awesome. There were zombies pig people, creepers, ghast, ocelots and withers. The wither just about blew my face off then l killed and all the our but there was a creeper rite behind me so l did a bach flip and sliced his head off. Then l was To be content you
A great start to your writing Thomas! You have described your setting really well. I love the WOW words you have used like 'hurtling'.
ReplyDeleteIs this finished? Can you please continue your story for me? The reply to my comment so I know when you are finished.
Mrs Natusch