Thursday, 7 November 2013

fireworks poem

boom! boom!
Why are there explosions?
 they are fireworks they are like fire fly's. colors were coming off the moon bang!colorful sparkling diamonds
 in the sky
exploding stars shooting into space.
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  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!7 November 2013 at 12:19

    To Thomas
    I like how you used five adjectives. My most favourite part of the poem is when the sparkling diamonds explode in the sky. Are the diamonds falling in the sky or just in the the sky?
    Zaric

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  2. Powerful Learners in Room 7!21 November 2013 at 11:48

    To Thomas
    Cool firework poem. My favourite part of the poem was they are like fire flys.
    From Titus

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  3. Anonymous25 February 2014 at 08:59

    Great job on the poem. I love how you used BANG in the middle of the paragraph it brought character:)

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