Looking at all that chocolate
Last night when I went to sleep I heard someone crack open
the door. I leapt out of bed and fell down the stairs and tumbled to the ground. I hit my head hard and I blacked out. When
I woke up and I was surrounded by
Chocolate men I said "Oh no" Then I thought oh I know karate. Next second they where leaning down.
Then I
shouted "What you are doing to me?" they replied with "I will eat you" Next second I was punching their faces and kicked them in the guts they fell to the ground. I dragged them to my bedroom and ate them.
Hi Thomas, Liam Here I really like your story. I really like all the action you put into it I also like the way that you made the font bigger when you shouted, just a question how many chocolate men were there?
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Yours Sincerely Liam
Hi Liam
DeleteThomas here,
Thank you for the comment. I don't know how many chocolate men there were but it was around 25 of them.
From Thomas